Great prose as always Bryan -- I need to remember who I am reading a little more next time, I friggin' love the turns these always take, you never fail to make it creative aha! I liked the bit of foreshadowing with the blown apart horses and soldiers and whatnot.
Great prose as always Bryan -- I need to remember who I am reading a little more next time, I friggin' love the turns these always take, you never fail to make it creative aha! I liked the bit of foreshadowing with the blown apart horses and soldiers and whatnot.
Thanks! It went through a few iterations but the turn was always going to happen :)
Lol, always love the dark turns these stories take. 😁
Don't mess with a man and his puzzles :)
Holy crap! That morphed into a totally different genre at the last minute. Thoroughly engrossing, but jeeeze! Okay, okay, she deserved it ...
I hope it didn't veer too abruptly, but, well, I know I veered abruptly...but DID she deserve it though? Wasn't it all just fun and games?
Umm. Not when it filtered through my head... ha ha ha Great story, Bryan.
Excellent writing, thanks for sharing.