A foreign couple visits Olinda with big hopes and little tact to buy her home.
Ooh, nice perspective shift. I wasn’t expecting that one. Fun to see Ms. Olinda from others’ eyes. :)
Thanks! It feels like I'm shortchanging the reader by shifting the perspective in such a short story, but actually, you do get a more complete portrait of them in the end! We'll see what happens in part 3 tomorrow...:)
Ooh, nice perspective shift. I wasn’t expecting that one. Fun to see Ms. Olinda from others’ eyes. :)
Thanks! It feels like I'm shortchanging the reader by shifting the perspective in such a short story, but actually, you do get a more complete portrait of them in the end! We'll see what happens in part 3 tomorrow...:)